I have decided to add another random draft from my novel, please comments and views are highly welcomed

Why Hate Us!!!

why hate my race

why hate our God

why hate our guts

why hate our businesses

i wounder if you have a heart

at least a sense of reason

or ever learned a lesson

even the future you can’t sight

i wish i was somewhere far

where i can walk freely

laugh and speak freely

maybe i can wake up every morning without fear

Ada stood behind her father’s house looking at the near distant mountain, it fascinated her on days like this, other days it was a mere sight she hardly notice, it was a peaceful Saturday morning the august weather brought cold breeze along with it, it had rained hours before now. The little grasses that grew wildly about wet her feet as she disturbed their peace with her gently zig zag movement, it was a deliberate movement to let her enjoy better the cold breeze that flew past her ear lobes, the intoxicating  nostalgia the fragrance of the near by mango plantation brought added a bit of innocence to the  raw pleasure nature made her feel, she felt so alive.

The paper she held in hands aroused her deep  feelings and clouded her thoughts withe emotion as her mind consistently reflected on the poem, the wording echoed in her mind persistently as she could hear her brother’s voice reading it to her over and over again, word by word, line by line, standard by standard. She imagined her brother’s face as he spoke the expression he wore, she sketched the picture in her mind over and over again each time adding a little detail to fit into her thoughts, she wanted so much to bring him alive through his words as she imagined what he thought of while he wrote, the feeling he felt, was he afraid? Did he feel his life fleeing? She remembered how he left her that morning, the blank expression on his face even though one of the bullet ripped his jaw apart his face still wore same expression, the horror of the sight of her brother’s body ripped apart by bullet had hunted her since she saw it the hospital, it was on days like this that she appreciated that last image she had of him.

Her gaze now rested on the emerging sun rays from behind the mountain, the yellow color melted into the soft blue sky with white cloud scattered all over its surface, she imagined her brother somewhere in the sky looking down at her then she felt a certain peace in her mind, slowly the day lost its virginity and her thoughts too began to cloud it no longer gave in to peaceful meditation the sweet sorrow she felt was replaced by mild irritation, her brother’s presence began to fade away, she had not realized how long she stood there till the first bite of the sun ray pierced her skin, then sudden brightness filled her eyes the king of the sky has taken his throne Ada thought to herself.

She spat out the saliva that her accumulated in her mouth and turned to head back to the house. Their was no one in sight even the farmers that plugged the near by field seem not in sight it was a typical Saturday morning dull as ever she thought to her self, the wild grasses were no longer wet but they seem to smile at her as she passed them, their rich green color shinning brightly in the morning sun.

( please note that this is just a mere draft and their is bound to be mistakes thanks people )


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